mastertremble

hi guys! if anyone interested, why dont we make a song for this unknown guy who was battered by his father during his younger age? 1 stanza per user then the user will reply for another 1 stanza and so on till we have it done.

here is the story...

when he was 3 yrs old, her mother abandoned them for another man. that was 2 years after his younger sister was born. his father suffered an extreme depression. his father always listen to this song "this time ill be sweeter" by angela bofil and started hammering his son even though for a small cause while the treatment for his younger sister is totally different. even the other members of the household has a different treatment for his younger sister. thus, he tried to rebel through small things at first. like not attending his classes, stealing small amounts of money, engaging fight with his classmates, saying bad things against his gradmother when she is scolding him, (his grandmother standed as his guardian since his mother abandoned them and his father is too busy working to support his kids)
when he reached his 20's, he started stealing huge amounts of money and even valuable items such expensive jewelries and so on... then his guardians decided to dispose him out of the house because of the bad things he is causing them. since his uncle felt pity for him, he decided to act as his guardian, though there are no stealing happening inside the house, hes doing crazy stuffs in his college. faling grades, drunk, smoking pot, gambling and it appears that he doesnt want to be corrected by anyone. hes freaking out, he even punch his father and harsh, malicious words were spoken against the persons acting as his guardians who are criticizing his actions. now he graduated college and jobless. his loveones seems not affected. his only way to regain sympathy from the persons who cared for him is to act pathetic.

whooshh!!! the story is actually longer than that but its tough to summarize it. hehehe

so i will start the stanza with....
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Felt like cold but the weather is warm
As if the sun is dying on me
I dont know if im numb
I cant feel but I can see, hear and breathe

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now just reply for the 2nd stanza, 3rd and so on. any number of lines will do.

hope we can finish this

thanks in advance...

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//mastertremble

Oculus capricorni

I look out from behind glass eyes
I steal glitter from the lead coffin of my childhood home
where you suffocated me when I cried
trapped me in nowhere, you just weren't there, I am gone
I am nowhere

Oculus capricorni

You took me out when I was alive
Each morning I begged and cried myself sick
As you dragged me out
To nowhere

Oculus capricorni

I search for a lady seated on a throne, in a room of blinding golden light
Hidden deep inside nowhere
Inside every moment that never happened
Every breath you stole from a living child
A fire burning guiding through the endless night streets