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Old 10-05-2008, 01:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
mileena
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Some new lyrics i would like feedback on =D

So i wrote some new lyrics the other day that i would love to get some feedback on.
Needless to say i was a little T.Oed..
=D


Im hanging from your crucifix
I can smell your fear from here
I can smell your rotting mind

Feelings aside
Im gonna hold my head high
I'll take it like a man unill the high subsides

Well theres blood on my hands
A slghtly sadistic romance
And all this time you thought that it was down to chance

So fire at will
The adreneline gives me a thrill
I'd love to get my hands on all those dreams you've killed

Another shot in the dark
And yeah you'll take it to heart
I'll burn down your empire and save you till last.

And now i can not bleed anymore..

I will never
I will NEVER
I will NEVER HURT AGAIN

Ahh it feels great to vent =D

cheers.
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